Sunday, 7 December 2008

Web headlines that could be improved.

Economy in turmoil and bailout plan adrift.
This is not new, it lacks novelty, punch. Not enticing enough

Job losses amount as economic picture worsens.
Here again  weak headline.  It needs to tell more of the story. What numbers, or how.

Oversight for auto bailout a key issue as drive for vote looms.
Does not tell a story or attract the reader.

Potential Obama pic visits education department.
Does not tell a story, or is this headline enticing.

Senators propose changes at DHS
It does not tell a story, and could explain more.





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